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to be heard among the chatter
Wanting to be seen through the crowd
Noticed by those that love me for me
Not just stuck, fading in the background
It started out small, one moment a day.
Then once a week in the blue hole
Now its everyday feeling alone
Needing someone to help pull me up
Dying to be heard among the chatter
Wanting to be seen through the crowd
Noticed by those that love me
Not just stuck, fading in the background
We are happy, amazing little people
Now we’re lost, needing a hand to guide us.
A helping hand, not a hand out
Needing to feel needed, wanted, and appreciated
Dying to be heard among the chatter
Wanting to be seen through the crowd
Noticed by those that love me for me
No just stuck fading in to the background
Everyone knows someone like this.
1 person that isn’t quite the same
They are doing things different or weird
Everyone needs help so reach out to others
So they don’t fade in the background
Watch it, I wanna be in control.
Be the mother figure to all.
Caring for strangers with no boundaries,
Taking it on without being asked.

Always wanting to know more,
Pushing not only me, but those around me
Working hard and staying dedicated
I need my questions answered and to be challenged.

Why can’t I play Cinderella?
I want a daddy, too!
Tired of trying to impress someone that doesn’t care,
It lowers my self-esteem.

Grew up in a church family,
love God, do good, volunteer,
All the expectations get too much.
Feel like I’m failing because I can’t do it all.

Gravel roads bring me peace.
I can think about the past on horseback.
Small towns take me back to home.
Speeding, drinking, Southern boy drawl
Feeling down, not into this moment
thoughts are in the pas as my body lives now.
Heart is set on the future, so I’m all kinds of confused.
Not living in the moment, day to day,
gotta take it second by second, minute by minute.
Can’t forgive myself for the mistakes I made.
Not comfortable in my skin or in my own home,
Questions asked daily inside my head.
Feeling down, not into this moment
thoughts are in the past as my body lives now.
Heart is set on the future, so I’m all kinds of confused.
Not living in the moment, day to day,
gotta take it second by second, minute by minute.
Make three steps forward, one step back.
Spin in circles, which way’s up?
Lost my way again, so please understand,
This isn’t the me I want to be.
Feeling down not into this moment
thoughts are in the past as body lives now.
Heart is set on the future, so I’m all kinds of confused.
Not living in the moment, day to day,
gotta take it second by second, minute by minute
Knife in the heart, tears in the eyes,
Brain is clouded beyond control
My voice hasn’t really been heard.
It’s been lost under the roar of others.
Can’t express my need for help,
The sense of dying every day.
I just let others walk all over me.
Can’t assert my voice or say no.
Learning to love and accept myself
has helped my voice grow stronger,
day by day, word by word.
You will hear me one day.
Just wait and see, prepare,
The diamond in the rough is ready to bloom.
Watch and listen for what I have to say!
Sitting here watching the TV screen,
Wondering what has happened with our world
Bombings, bullies, drugs, slang
My generation has so much to overcome.
Politicians are getting more outrageous.
Trump’s leading in the polls, oh, my!
Just kill me now, coz if he wins,
He better be prepared for the World War 3.
My generation has so much more to learn.
Look at all the deaths in schools.
These shootings are horrendous, but what’s scary still,
most students don’t know half as much as they did 50 years ago.
Where did the good public education go?
My generation has so much to live up to.
The glass ceiling has not been broken.
Women are still second class and inferior.
When will this change and women pride flower
like black pride has in this generation.
So my grandchildren can do anything, no matter what.
My generation has so much to work towards
okay. so bored n scared. writings all but stopped fighting with bf. What can anyone do. everything sucks

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lkay557
Shianne Davis
Artist | Student | Literature
United States
i am a girl writing to get my feeling out. This is to help me do better. As a 14 year old girl all my writings come from real events. If you can help fix my writings feel free to tell me how to do it. Thanks!
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Taukohurina Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
You are smart.
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lkay557 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Student Writer
thank you. i try lol its just hard
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fredericks-uk Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
Hi Shianne,
Thanks for the fave.
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lkay557 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Writer
you are welcom
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lkay557 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student Writer
I hope you guys can feel the emotion i write. To me the emotion is the best thing a write about. Im going through a lot and have almost stopped writing. If you know how to fix any of my work please do.
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IronAries Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
Hi Ikay557!

Thank you for the add and fav! :)
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JasmineSFox Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013   Traditional Artist
thanks for the fave :)
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ghearradh Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
thank you thank you thank you so so much for watching me! i really appreciate it! :hug:
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l0iss0a Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Student General Artist
thanks for the faaav~
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Balou-chan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student Photographer
Thanks for the fav~! 
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